Sprout.

CnC if you can please.

 

text is kinda iffy but i love the abstract, nice stuff ^_^

 

The composition is pretty much terrible mate, it doesnt capture the actual effects well at all. Dont get me wrong, the effects are amazing, totally stunning. But the way you arranged it all the way to the right you just seem to take it out of the focal

 

Text drags my eye away from the focal

 

agreed tone down text a little to bring more focal towards piece

 

messy/random c4d .......no focal.....bad colors.......bad type

 

Thanks for the comments. The lil' bright area is the focal. Like it is about to sprout. I'll remove the text and update later.

 

Here is an updated version.

 

I like that one.... I don't know about the other

 

Ty for the comment.

 

sharpen
colors could be pink imo would look 'sexierrrrr!'
does lack a better focal point though