Spidey Smelting

Spidey Smelting

 

Wierd but good, like the effects but the flow seems a little off, text could maby come a touch closer to his chest too imo

 

Thanks!

 

the effects look pretty awesome

 

Awesome effects !!! Gj dude

 

The effects are good, and the text is well placed. Good job

 

This is a really fun tag and I love the melting effect that you gave to it. Like the 3rd movie when he's tearing off the black spidey suit, it sort of seemed to melt off him. This sort of makes me feel that if spiderman was evil it might be him shedding off the good suit. I love that idea, and of course that might not be what you were going for, but that's why we all have our own interpretation. I know we all want the technical merits of all the sigs, but I'll only say this much. It seems a bit mono-tone and lacks depth, but I see beyond all that. It has it's own character and there seems to be a bit more feel to this sigs than most I see. Most look like they're trying to impress their friends rather than do the art, which is a shame. You got the art feeling down, so don't worry, the technical part will come soon enough.

 

Thanks mate on the nice comment

 

if you removed the effect around his chest i think its would be alot better.

 

Hi Aer. Work on:
color
lighting
depth
smudging
border
text

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Nah.

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I think you're overanalyzing.

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Not so much.

... Nah, I jokes with all of you. ^_^ Great concept, but I think you'll get more of the tearing apart look you're going for by adding in A LOT of light and smoke on his sides. This will also solve your color, lighting, and depth problems. The effects on his chest and face and all are fine, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. The fire on the left and right side is a little flat so work on that. I personally don't think the border works, either get rid of it or do top and bottom cinema style (even that I don't think is too great). Either get rid of the text or figure out another way to fit it in.

I had some great smoke brushes (with scatter utility) so if I find em I'll def give those to ya. Good luck! B)

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Some great CnC people.

Looks good mate.
Work on your smudging a bit and you'll be stompin'.
Also, like carrie said, depth can be a problem too. Very nice concept.
Love the render too. Honestly, the only thing that I don't like is the smudging on the left.
Looks like you got lazy. Don't worry about spending more time on parts like those!
It looks ok, but it could be AMAZING. Take the time you need and experiment with your smudges.
The strokes right now look a little bit bleh. But it's still awesome, just giving a tipper.