~~|spider-man|~~

C&C Much Appreciated.

v2:

 

Heh,
Looks pretty tight.
I like the work you've been doing
with wireframes.

Ok,
Colors are pretty hawt, but I don't liike the lonely light blue part on the left.
The focul's wonderful. really kickin'. Nice light as well. ^_^

My only advice would be,
Slightly sharpen a few areas closer to him. Not too sharp, just a tiny bit.
Then, take that blue and change it's hue! ... That ryhmes lol. *dorkeh look*

Nice.

 

Bump. I posted an edited version.

I think I sharpened it too much. -_-

 

I would lose some of the wireframe c4d on the right side it kinda messes with the flow.

 

i agree with Graphix lose some of that wireframe and it will look better.

 

the right side is meh compared to the left side.

 

Love that sig. Only thing is I dont like the render. Otherwise, very nice effects and I love the wireframes. Those are really hard to work with.