Spawn Render

Hi im new to Game renders, posting wise anyway ;]
Well, this is my first render.
It was quite difficult for me as mouse sucks & I have unsteady hands

Its a little bit choppy but oh well ^^

Origional





(one with a transparent and one without just incase maybe?)
As you may have realised I did delete some of the shadingon the cloak, only cos it looked weird. "/

I've just seen the transparent one in FF and there are alot of random pixels from bits I must've missed. Sorry ;P

 

not bad

 

Not bad for your first render, try and take your time and make sure that all sections have been removed. Nice trY !

 

not so good.

but, since it was ur first render. then u should start with simple pics. not to much details. practice do master

 

good job for a first try, keep it up

 

Its not terrible, just practice some.

 

Pretty cool original, some stuff left over, but overall, pretty good.

 

Not bad for a first one
Keep it up, man
Practice

 

im gonn abe honest... not good... cuz like all of the things that u deleted u missed spots...its obvious u erased into white... and zoommed all the way out or close to it... try erasing or whatnot while zoomed in more than halfway... that way u dont miss little splotches like that...

 

Well, not too bad, but it could use some work.

Nice try, though.

 

I might attempt to cut it myself. Good job on it.

 

nice cut mate

 

for a 1st render it's cool keep it up

 

A Bit choppy but good job non the less.

 

good job for a first render, you should of used another pictuer that was more simple to do