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  1. `sparks

    `sparks Jcoca

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    I like the "overall" look, however there's some problems i see. The lines you have flowing through are choppy where they meet the c4d, the text is a bad choice for something that style (i'd just stay away from comic sans in any design) and that random lookin white text in the background looks weird. I think you got the style down but just elinmate some stuff and it'll look better.
     
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    it's a great concept but I think it would look better if you blended the c4d render by fading some of the parts off to the right out a little by a low opacity erase, also blend some of the bg colors onto the c4d render to give it a realistic refractive light.
     
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    Ok, thanks =D

    I'll fix that once my computer is alive again.
     

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