3rd LP. I just like the weaving lines xD Full View to see them pl0x. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54875205/ CnC would be great.
I like the "overall" look, however there's some problems i see. The lines you have flowing through are choppy where they meet the c4d, the text is a bad choice for something that style (i'd just stay away from comic sans in any design) and that random lookin white text in the background looks weird. I think you got the style down but just elinmate some stuff and it'll look better.
it's a great concept but I think it would look better if you blended the c4d render by fading some of the parts off to the right out a little by a low opacity erase, also blend some of the bg colors onto the c4d render to give it a realistic refractive light.