Space Scene

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by superklutch3000, May 25, 2008.

  1. May 25, 2008 at 10:12 PM #1
    superklutch3000

    superklutch3000 Well-Known Member

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    C&C please, what to improve?
     
  2. May 25, 2008 at 11:16 PM #2
    o8 Designs

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    first of all it could lose the text.. a little bit over sharpened, the stars look more like dots, also it could use some sort of light source and direction, other then that you did a great job man.. keep it up
     
  3. May 26, 2008 at 12:48 AM #3
    Neuron

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    I think o8 Designs is lost.

    It's a bit over sharpened and burnt out. The lighting is fine. Text is boring. The brushing is pretty nice.

    Overall it's fairly decent, it's just a pretty dark piece. Keep practicing. :)
     

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