text is plain. background is bland. lighting is . . .odd. render needs to be blended in more - it looks like you just slapped it onto a background and put a lighting effect.
Very, very nice. I like the background and the coloring a lot! Hmm. The border is bothering me here. Maybe make it soft light or change it to a 1 pixel black border. Nice job blending the render. The text seems to break the flow of this one. Maybe blend the text and add styles to it. Still a great job though! B)
Thanks guys. When I was following 2 different Tut's with my style they called for B&W and I left it color. That's why the blending is messed. Also I just installed Photoshop again on my new computer so I don't got any good texts of my own. Gonna make some this week probably.
Work on your typographical skillz. The text seems to totally not match the pic. Also, that lens flare in the top right seems to be distracting. Maybe just use soft brushes and some linear dodging? Also, maybe more effects to communicate flow would be good. Not bad. I remember you said you'd been off a while, so I think just more tutorials would get you back to par.
