Sotw Try But Not Sure If Ill Enter Cuz Still Not Confident Lol

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Jord4n, Apr 21, 2008.

  1. Jord4n

    Jord4n Well-Known Member

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    v1:[​IMG]

    v2: [​IMG]

    20% b/w gradient map added


    should i add somethin close range on the right?
     
  2. th3drag0n

    th3drag0n Well-Known Member

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    i think its fine as is,
    you dont wanna clutter it up either,

    if you look at most of the other SOTW winners
    all there tags have been simple with no clutter,

    v2 ftw :)
     
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    Great job I think a stronger lighting effect would help bring out the mood that and maybe some rose petals or something but still looks very nice
     
  4. Jord4n

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    thanks i need to find pedal effects.... like Neo used some....dunno if u know who he is but he uses it quite alot thanks for comments
     
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    try some overexposure lighting stocks, should hit this one through the roof (if ya havnt got any mind if i find some and edit this one for ya?)
     
  6. Jord4n

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    it looks good,v2 is nice :)
    and if he edits the tag for you,not sure if you'll be able to use it in sotw...
     
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    Lacks depth which to me feels like the BG is out doing the focal. Doesn't seem like you tried to add depth to the focal, just looks like you pasted the render on a stock. Text could be a lot better as well.
     
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    I think adding depth to it would make it look a lot better. Other than that, I think it looks nice.
     
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    I can see through the stock, blending probs there, not bad overall.
     
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    Not bad, it seems a tad bright IMO. Depth needs some work though.
     

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