The focal itself seems kind of edgy, and the effects and everything seem too blurred. Also you need to work on your text a bit. It's not bad though, not much to say negatively about it though.
more contrast more contrast more contrast lol looks like it's trying to see through powder with a pink light and a 35mm lens. I think putting curves layer to add contrast without brightening the white more would make it look purty cool but hey.... I could be wrong