I like the one without the text most. Sharpen the focal a bit more and make it stand out better from the background. The light needs to affect the whole thing a little better. A little more color. Its quite good still. Like the overall effect.
last version is deffo the best. You should work on the focal so it stands out more. I like the overall look of the tag though
Looks cool dood. The text needs alittle work, and the middle part is very bright, use color burn to ease the brightness. Also sharpen the render and background. Overall awesome tag.
Really work on your text, stick with the default fonts and don't outline it 16pix sharpen the render to make it stand out more, also maybe add some background effects. ~greetz