Sora Signature Cnc

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by FinestShadow, Mar 17, 2008.

  1. FinestShadow

    FinestShadow Well-Known Member

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    This is for a SotW entry at another forum, any suggestions to change it before i enter it?
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  2. Wynter

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    I'd make the render blend better with the background- it stands out too much.. Also, the colouring on the render itself doesnt look right to me.. Like you have put a single colour balance over to try and match it to the background. Try to keep the renders original colour as much as possible so it doesnt end up looking like you have done that.
    Other than that, its nice. The background I like, and the actual overall colours are nice too :)
     
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    Ok tyvm, i added a color balance already, but i'll change it to less green :D
    Thnx for feedback
     
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    Yeah, the render needs a lot of blending. Background is nice though.
     
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    I actually but 2 smudge layers and a feather layer under those but i guess it didnt show up =/
     
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    Nice bg, try putting some of them in front of the render to add some nice blending. ;)
     
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    Agreed with all of the above. Blending would be good. Also, try to unify the colors with gradient maps and photofilters that cover the whole sig not just one part. ;)

    To blend on this one, try using a few overlapping C4Ds and bringing some of those smudged layers to the foreground, eh? ^_^
     
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    Ok, ill do that V2, coming in bout 5min :D
     
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    I didn't have time today to really change it but heres a V2.
    Changed the smudge layer order and added a bluer color balance
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    bump
     
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    Text needs work placement and font face should be changed.....colors are good, a little more depth could be used but other than that...its a step up
     
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    What font do u recommend and where do u think it should be placed
     

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