first thing i notice is that its the same as the graffiti tag -.- just some different effects. give yourself some more variety, if you cant come up with any new ideas try some tuts (always an option, no matter ur skill level). but as for this tag, i first thing i'd like to suggest is don't cover up your renders, your light streaks go right over their faces and kinda obscure them next, try keeping all your text together, the text in the middle is kinda distracting from the renders, and then theres also text in the corners and i really just don't get a clear idea which part im supposed to look at keep working on em, not a bad start but i think you can do better ^_^
i wanted to try somthing different with the same style to see if i could get the same effect replicated, so thats y its almost the same, the lines of white were me trying to get a glow on the renders (seems not to have worked as planned) the text well the text was for fun guess didnt work out right either, i will find somthing diff now...hmmm what to make since i have a hard time with the tuts i will work on somthing and show it at some point
