Song I Wrote!

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  1. Recon

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    Hey Guys and Gals! It's been a while since i've been around here, so i figured i'd let you know what i've been up to a bit. I made this video a couple nights ago with a song i wrote. I am aware that i'm a little out of pitch on here but hey, what do you expect for 3:30AM in the morning lol :P

    I'd appreciate it IMMENSELY if you guys you rate it what it deserves and leave me a comment (on here or youtube) if feel inclined

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYaTGZ9CfKY

    Thanks a ton!
    (ps, sorry for some of the audio quality, it was miraculously recorded using a guitar hero microphone lol :P)

    ... once youtube is done with maintenance i'll add the lyrics to the song in the comments
     
  2. Papermache

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    You really need a better recording device, audio is terrible. Song sounds good from what I can hear though I do have a soft spot for acoustic so i might be biased.
     
  3. Renagade

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    Yes, you do need a better camera... but either way it sounds like it could be good.

    I feel like your voice is too 'airy' or 'breathy' though.
     
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    Pretty average tbh. Sounds like every other generic acoustic misogynistic teen angst love song that you might find floating around youtube. Recording quality is too low to actually make out more than every 20th word or so, so I can't really comment on the strength of your lyrics, but you use an incredibly basic chord progression.

    Add a breakdown, write out your lyrics in the description or put them here, improve recording quality, delete the 3 god damn minutes of time wasting at the beginning of your video and repost it so we can give you some better feedback.
     
  5. Recon

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    lol hey thanks guys, and tbh getting the rank of average using a guitar hero mic kinda sounds like a compliment lol, almost like being an average gfx designer here but only using something like paint.

    i will def. post something with a bit more quality once i get my next pay check. thx for the feedback

    (ps. it's definitely not a love song :P)
     
  6. Kristibabycakes

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    it sounds pretty good :mellow:
     
  7. Have a nice day

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    Good job.
     
  8. johnnypas12

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    sounds nice better than anyhting i can do
     
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    pretty sexy face you got baby
     

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