"So I thought I needed to forget my past...

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ghostzero, Jun 11, 2010.

  1. Ghostzero

    Ghostzero Well-Known Member

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    And I became Lightning"

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    I just fell in love with the personality of this character, and I think this servers her justice ^_^

    My first in quite a while, I also did the render (first time doing CGI Hair) and you should find it in the render section in a couple of minutes (its huge res so I need to find a suitable host)

    Anyways, critique away!
     
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  2. nicotaku

    nicotaku Well-Known Member

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    those blurred specks on the bottom are meh. and your text (correct me if im wrong) i thinkl has outerglow applied on it. and it attracts attention to your unblended text w/c is bad.

    i do like your render placement and your background
     
  3. Ghostzero

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    Yeah... Text always was (and will continue to be) my worst enemy.

    I uploaded v2 to the first post, the specks are here to stay mostly because it looks bad without them now (I accidentally deleted part of the render).
     
  4. GLoRy Designs

    GLoRy Designs Well-Known Member

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    I hate when people don't know what they are talking about...First of all, Your tag has great potential, but you need more depth and more effects. The lighting is okay, but could be better(Which also can give a bit of depth to the signature.). Also the text,which everyone has a tough time at is a tad bit boring and needs more color to it. KIU though you have good potential :).
     
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    still needs better text
     

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