hmm i sorta like this piece but your initial is a little bright and my eyes wanna wander over to that. try blending the red c4d better it doesnt look like it is going out of focus. by that last statement i mean you need to create some depth. but not bad overall.
<div align="center">It looks great at first glance, but after a long glance I notice it seems almost flat. Sure it has some depth, but not much so you should improve that. That's about the only negative I can really notice.</div>
I like it I think the V that is white should be blended better and it really doesn't have much depth but i do like it
