Smudging

this is my first tag i've made not using characters, it was a little awkward for me, its smudging for the most part with a bit of c4d peices in there i smudged over it for some detail.



V2

 

compared to the tags you are wearing, this is your best.
depth is great
lighting is nice
neg space in top left is ugly though..
also, the colors are bad T_T

 

thanks for the input, i wanted it to be more like a beam of light through the tag, not taking up everything wich is why there is so much blank space, i understand the complaint though.

 

if you did more adjustment layers and a match color layer this tag can be sick, def rework the typo,tag looks like shards of amber glass

 

This is great,my only complaint is I'd lose the text or make the placement better.

 

Poor text, I like your smudging though, colors should be more deep

 

not bad...make some adj as mentioned by others and be totally awesome!

 

Wow, I really like the colors. You did great with the smudging. Just follow Xed's advice, 'cause he knows what he's talking about.

 

I always wanted to achieve that sort of smudging effect. Great job m8!

 

thanks everyone for the suggestions. I took the color suggestions and reworked them, does it look better?

 

v2 looks awesome mate nice job!
im stealing it

KTHXBAI!

 

Nice work, as they said before though the colouring could use some work, and lose the text altogether.

 

v2
bit grainy
lovin the brushing tho

 

ok now get ya burn tool and burn all the 'deep' areas like the dark smudged areas dont overdo it...