~~ Smelly Armpit ~~

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .ArctiC., Nov 23, 2007.

  1. .ArctiC.

    .ArctiC. Well-Known Member

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    wasnt happy with how this turned out. but i've got nothing else to do
    used a pic of esuna which she gave me of herself
    thanks for not being grossed out by the title
    [no, i will not remove the skulls and stink lines]
     
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    i dont get much from the text. and the skulls arent the greatest addition.
     
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    Colour doesnt work and render needs to blend..Dont like the stripe either...c4d is nice.
     
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    meh. kthx
     
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    title and skulls don't really fit the mood of the rest of the tag.
    that and the curved c4d above the text is clashing with the surrounding color, imo.
     
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    lol its a cool concept and does work well..However some things dont go..like the text i think it could be much better try different placing maybe.The backgorund on the left the cds look random and it dont really go with the tag so jus try fixing that.
     
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    It sucks when you don't like a piece. lol
    But, hey, you like one soon. ;)

    It's not a bad idea. ^_^ It's actually kind of
    cool. :D

    Just maybe needs some work. ;)
     
  8. .ArctiC.

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    yeah. i kinda went a bit lazy with the text. but i'm still keeping the skull
     
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    try taking out the font
     
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    hehee only think i dont like is the clippings, otherwise i like it xD
     
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    I've seen that render before, but calling i that, or putting the text on, really brings out the fact that possibly, her armpits stink. Made me laugh when I saw it, good job.

    If you wanted a rating;
    #1 - 7/10
    #2 - 8.5/10

    Basically, the colour really annoys me about it, and the skulls don't look bad in #1
    In #2, the unsaturated design is great, the skulls blend in more.
    In both of them, the text and the right side of the signature let you down.

    J a c K
     
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    haha thanks.

    i repaired the fonts but im too lazy to post it
     

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