I think its too messy for my liking. And its lacking a focal point imo. It also lacks some depht. But GJ
Some flow would make it a bit nicer. The bw version looks way better than the colored because the colors do not really fit...
The X or + looks a bit of a throw off, and the tag could use a bit more emphasis. its just a bit boring. The girl should be stronger in contrast, as she is hiding inside the background. Too bad you didn't have the name Soulja Boy back when you joined in April 07, that would be so great.