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  1. xXEwartXx

    xXEwartXx Well-Known Member

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    yo

    i need to add text to this but will probably make it look really bad.


    any tips for text?

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  2. Transluc3nt

    Transluc3nt Well-Known Member

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    I think the render placement could be better. A little more to the right. The line is kind of random, the background is a bit blurred so you could add some foreground effects to create some depth. Add a bit more color to it maybe... kind of monotone as it is.

    Text could be simple and placed just above the guitar.
     
  3. xXEwartXx

    xXEwartXx Well-Known Member

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    thanks for the comments, meant to remove the line (oops), think i will leave the position on this and work the foreground. Can always start over coz its the only way to learn.
     
  4. JL Wamm

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    i would get a nice text and make it go slanted so it gose up against the gutiar in a yellow goldish color. or on the orange line
     
  5. InsaneKid

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    the text needs alot more depth. but the work is vfery original :)
     
  6. xXEwartXx

    xXEwartXx Well-Known Member

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    hey thanks


    C&C taken on board, think ill amend this and see the outcome and also re create with a bigger more central focal. i will put up the results
     
  7. xXEwartXx

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    new take

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