nice very nice i like he lighting i think it s very good and u ve got it right, the text is a lil odd though but yeh thats not big deal, those black lines dont knw how i feel abt em they look nice but can i see a version without them maybe...Overall very nice.
looks like all you added was light(kinda distracting) and text(doesnt look very good) i kno ur going for that simple look but its a little too plain for me. try making the text blend more maybe use the edges of the tag to clip mask the text. And change that annoying light source. maybe add some colour and lower the opacity
