the focal is a little too thin, theres nothing that is real solid or that the rest of the tag builds around. try making the car less transparent? just some thoughts, gj tho
Start by downloading brushes you like from places like Deviant art.. Make a new document in photoshop with whatever dimension you want... then start brushing black on on white and then white on black.. make 30 or so layers until you like where it's going. That's where you should start.. and then go from there. Have fun mate! PS adventures ahoy!