Please comment on dA as well as here http://discharged.deviantart.com/art/Shattered-77890643 All CnC appreciated
Hmm... It's not bad, but I really don't know about the colors. They just seem very...odd... They're not very many effects going on in the background, it almost looks like a discolored c4d put onto a yellow bg. :/ I don't really feel like the BG matches well with the main render. I'm not really sure where you got the name "Shattered", as it well.. doesn't look like anything's being shattered at all. Try using a "thinner" c4d render, and smuding (with scattering)it some. Right now, the chunks look too big. When I think of shattering, I think of a bunch of really small pieces. The text is alright, nothing special. But if you're going to keep the "shattered" theme, you may want to "shatter" it too, by rasterizing the layer and smudging it too. The whole piece just feels kinda empty for such a bold name. Sorry if this sounded critical. :/
