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  1. USSilentSniper

    USSilentSniper Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">Latest, deals with a major issue in our lives.
    The thing in the center is supposed to be an abstract version of the "Serpent Dragon".
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    He swindles
    Rotting forever, burning
    Despising all, evil
    He steals, kills, burning
    We can stop him
    Spread the word
    For Archegos is near
    Time to slay

    Serpent Dragon - Trent</div>
     
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    To much neg space. Throws the whole sig off. I dunno, I like the render or whatever it is that you used for this. I could care less for the text also.
     
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    ahh Silent your tags are great. The concept is great, I think the balance of positive and negative space is great as well. Coloring could use a little work, as well as the text. The effects are great as well. :)
     
  4. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks for the comments.
    I don't use renders, and what negative space? I made sure the whole bg had some texture to it.
    Yeah i wasn't sure what to do about text.
     
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    What I meant by negative space is where it has just a little texture, not just pure blank space. I usually refer to negative space like that :)
     
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    I as well.
     
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    Only parts I'm not feeling are the lense flare and the text. The focal looks amazing and full of depth. Are the poem and tag referring to the devil?
     
  8. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks, yes it is referring to the devil.
    The lens flare is there for the focal though, draws you eye doesnt it?
    But yeah i may make a textless version.
     
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    Nice effects, colors and lighning. But, where is the dragon?
     
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    i like the colors. Nice job.
     
  11. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks for the comments.
    It's abstract, kind of hard to see but it's in the middle.
     
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    colors are awesome on this one
     
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    I like this piece, except it's all light. If you where to tone it down, and fix your text a bit, it would be magnificent. Don't try to be too fancy with your text on something like this, and you shouldn't hide it down in the corner.
     

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