Scorpion

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  1. username1130

    username1130 Well-Known Member

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    If you don't like it please tell me what part you don't like thanks.
     
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    The text + colours.
     
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    You mean the Text and Text Color? or the sig color?
     
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    Colours in general. Bit monotonedd
     
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    Idk coz when i make a sig i just copy 1 from the render and make the other 1 black or white :x i guess ill change that.
     
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    I made some changes
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    Yes the colors do make this signature worse than it should be.
    You shouldn't have just one color like that, if your render is yellow and black like
    scorpion is, then you should get a color base off of him not the same exact color
    and have it run over him and the BG.

    Personally I like the text except for the brutality part and the kev on
    the bottom right, you don't always need to add your name, if you ever
    see someone take your art you own rights to it automatically for life as long as
    you hold on to the PSD for proof.

    Just remember this when your doing tags in general this especially apply's on text
    "More isn't always better."
    For example the Hanzo Hasashi and scorpion would have been enough text.

    So my suggestion to help out your color situation is this....

    It seems to me that you have the coloring layer on top of your render,
    so erase the color that goes over the render it'll make the render stand
    out more and wont make it look so washed out.

    For the lighting source (the right side where its brightest) add some whiter coloring to it.

    Also try blending the render in using some smudge effects or something.

    It seems to me that you haven't been doing GFX for that long so check out
    some tutorials as well. You don't need to follow then exactly just pay
    attention to how they apply there effects and where they show you to
    place layers, they'll help you greatly improve your knowledge in your art.

    And last if you have any questions about my comment let me know :D I'll be glad to help.
     
  8. LuckyxFiasco

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    if you don't take this reply and do what they said, i will haha

    nah but the work isnt too bad there's is a just a few things you could have fiddled with in the process and take ^^^ to the brain cause there is some legitimate knowledge in there brah.
     
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    Okay sir i will do all of your suggestion imma search some guides and some other stuffs and try out new things thanks ^^.
    Oh and ive been doing this stuffs for like a month. xD

    I tried to do the stuff you told me i think this is better ^^
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    And please if you think i need a guide please link me 1 coz it's hard for me to find 1 that i want :c.
     
  10. Proximity-HazeD

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    There you go, it's better but you still need to fix the lighting :X :D
    and just go to the tutorial section on this website there's plenty of them there.

    Also it isn't that you need a guide, I'm just suggestion looking at a few to pick up a few effects
    to add into your signatures, as well as lighting, smudging and adjustment layers.
     
  11. username1130

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    Okay sir im really trying to focus on learning smudging.
     
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    Im dont like the sig becuase there isnt really a nice fx and is almost the same colour
     
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    Remove the outer glow from the render.......... it makes it look really cheesy IMO.
     

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