Sorry, I don't like it at all. The background may as well have been brushed, as it looks just as bad as if it was. The render is unblended and the text is very bad. There is no depth, flow or lighting, and could do with some colouring. Probably a 2/10 from me.
I'm not usually that harsh, But i hate to admit, I agree. It looks really random. But, hey, you win some, you lose some. :lol: