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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by LL COOL JEW, Sep 1, 2009.

  1. LL COOL JEW

    LL COOL JEW Well-Known Member

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    Fire effects on bird are good but very disconnected. Fire effects on town are way too big in scale to the building and town itself. Looks very out of place, or like the town is a miniature. Liking all the colors except the brown hill in the background. Add some more blue from the night sky into that. Also the front of the hill is out of focus while the far away part is in focus. This screws up the perspective and depth. Aside from those things it looks really nice, great concept and fairly well done.
     
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    thanks, I agree on the blurring, I noticed I messed that up after I uploaded it. Been a long time since I did anything so I am quite happy with the result. thanks for the tips!
     
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    i find the pic looks to real and the fire out of place, just add some blending and it could be cool.
     

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