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  1. bOnZai

    bOnZai Well-Known Member

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    Ended up with somethin' pretty different here. New style for me, tell me how to improve please.

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    It has a lack of effects right now, I know it.
     
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    Dude, thats effin sick.
    I love it.
     
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    looks nice :D
     
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    looks like a pic of a guy behind a tablecloth.. maybe im missing something? describe what you did... im probably focusing at all the wrong places
     
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    It's too repetitive and boring. It needs a lightsource and depth as well. Like you said, needs fx as well.
     
  6. bOnZai

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    Rendered the guy and used clipping mask to make the exact pattern I wanted as a background. Then I corrected the lightning over his face. I played with the text tool to make an effect around him, used the same word « sadness ». Last step was to add different pattern on multiply (minor changes on the background). Using a soft blue brush, I made a little bit of color cuz I found it monotomne, now I am looking to awesome fx to add on it.

    Any ideas ?
     
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    Not really sure where you should go with this one, possibly mix it up with some other patterns?
     
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    To me, only the text looks great. It's probably one of your rare i dislike.
    Btw your render looks like he wants to quit life ASAP. :P
     
  9. Hoplite_A2

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    Hmm....
    I don't know bro.
    All that black and white makes the focul really inneffective
    imo. :(

    I agree with CarpeDiem, maybe try several different patterns
    and mix it up with some colors. ;)

    Also, text is very unreadable. :|

    It's got potential, but it looks flat and unfinished right now.
     

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