: S T A L K E R :

I'm really happy with the way this turned out.

 

kill the text..
nice smudge...light and depth could be improved

 

I will say text is my downfall, just if i got rid of it wont you think it would be too much "blank/open" space?
I'm sure if I can nail the text it would make it alot better

 

love the overall colors used in this bro.
and a nicely placed light source,

but as has been said the text is a little off,
and brings it down somewhat.

get a v2, cuz i wanna see it!
hehehe

 

Thanks
I'll work on a v.2 then

-EDIT-

v.2


v.3


I'm still not sure

 

I like v.2 tbh great work keep it up man maybe lighten him up a bit more infront of his face?

 

indeed v2,
and i think the lighting is perfeccccttttttttt!!!

 

Thanks for the comments guys.
Think I may do a really in depth tutorial on this sig

 

text is alright but maybe add some glow to parts of it

the tag however is nice simplistic but nice

good lighting

 

Nah man. Text is rocking. Only advice is to select the layer of the "S.T.A.L.K.E.R" text and hit Window>> Character, and find the bit where it has the AV with the little double arrow underneath and increase it to stretch that text out a little. Then on the smaller subtext, make it so that they aren't all left aligned, but are all out of alignment. Then make it all a bit smaller and move it down a little, and it'll be HAWWWWWTTTT!!!!

 

Thanks for the advice..i'll give it ago