Round #3 Entries

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  1. kovan

    kovan Senior Member

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    everyone can post their entry in this topic to receive CnC,

    this is my entry for now .. i might change it

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  2. midnight

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    my entry:

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    .... damn, i hate my entry now cuz of kovans, i think the lighting on the left of his body is not supposed to be there? but i love that crisp/ grainy look you have, the colors and composition are also great
     
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    nicely done to both of you....
     
  4. kovan

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    midnight, you could remove the big c4d or what it is on the right .. and also it needs some more, i don't know what but it feels like it's to empty

    and also guys, do you think i should keep the white knights on the left background ? is it noticable that they are knights ?
     
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    take it out plz
     
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    Knights added a bit of touch imo
     
  7. kovan

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    ^ yes that's what i thought, without them it seems to empty
     
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  9. AnythingPink

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    Very cool, you always make great use of negative space..

    Parts of the effects, like the bubbles look oversharpened though.

    And thanks you kinda sparked a concept for me xD
     
  10. .PROpel

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    love urs kovan and sexbox lol, mine looks horrible compared to urs
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  11. AnythingPink

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    It's not that bad, wouldn't say horrible..

    I suggest adding clipping masks and flipping them horizontally that way you can cover up the white some more with darker effects, and coverup some of the black with lighter effects. Try getting some flow into it.
     
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    oops, forgot about this. lol. I'll have a go later
     
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    how bout now, i fixed some wite parts, but it got chaotic so i lowered some fill and opac:
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    I actually like it alot more now, and the chaotic feel to it actually can work with this render.

    If you think it's too chaotic just crop off some
     
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    propel .. v2 and move the render a few layers up to make him more noticable :P
    and have some more contrast between the white and dark parts
     

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