Rough Draft

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Alak, Nov 25, 2009.

  1. Alak

    Alak Well-Known Member

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    So here's two pieces that I'm working on that sort of contrast each other in style. If you guys could provide some feedback and commentary, that would be awesome. Additions, eliminations, changes, love, hate, etc. are what I'm hoping to see in replies. Thanks a bunch!

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    PS- Imageshack won't upload the second one in its original size.
     
  2. -P-

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    second one is good!
    not feeling the first.
     
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    2nd one is very good, 1st, you may need some detail work, and lighting issues throw it off
     
  4. Alak

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    Alright I'm trying to edit the light source in the render itself to coincide with a black background. I'm getting the vibe that the first one's a bit...bland. Any other suggestions?
     
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    first one just doesn't have a good flow.. create a flow
     
  6. Alak

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    Yeah I think I might try to completely remake the first one since I don't have any ideas on how to better it in its current state. Thanks for the replies, though! I'll definitely keep flow in mind.
     

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