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Focal needs to stand out more, took me a while to find. Great FX tho, GJ.

 

thanks for the tip

 

I like your currents alot more(they are hawt ) but its still nice, i agree on the focal point and the text could use some work..

 

Yep, a bit more definition of the focal, and a bit more colour blending, and it'll be awesome.

 

hmm i have already sharpened the focal a lot...any suggestions on how i could improve this?

 

Not sure. It blends incredibly well in my opinion. It's difficult to find at first, but if you look for it, it can be spotted fairly easily. One of your best in my opinion, but not your best I don't think. Great tutorials and great sigs. Not sure if you noticed, but the sig I have now - I used your tutorial for. Also, you've gotta update your most recent sig in your signature. =P

 

yes yes i do, and nice outcome there man

 

The colors of the render/focal are completely different than the bg and effects. I'd say a b/w version may work better.

 

define the focal and add one more texture to the bg but not in same elements as used already. will add more detail in foreground and aid depth..

 

thanks guys i think i may play around a bit more see what i can do with it...

 

lil hard to see the focal but i still dig it

 

ty, updated with versions from the cc

 

focal needs to be brought out more imo. GJ overall.

 

okay thanks