Hey murray; look you have to tell me you like this hahaha. I really wanna bring this to a close. What say you to this. Not a final piece. But I need you to comment on whether you like the colours and style. Ummm, what was I gonna say; Yeh, I'll be on msn. Chow.
Here is one idea; masking off parts to make it more clearer to read; I also replaced the t with a more legible t. That's also an option; replacing certain letters, done right; it doesn't screw up the consistency of the piece.