Renagade's Sotw

Who knows?

Might change my entry later.

v1



v2 (Changed text)

 

not a huge fan of the "renegade" text. Also, the red on "japan" is a little too vibrant. in that vein, "japan" might be too close to the farthest-left beam.

im just going to assume this is a manip, in which case the rest of the sig looks nice and clean. i would just play with the text a little more.

 

I only did it because of Japan's flag.

May mess around with it later.

Thanks.

 

I'm not a fan of any of the text so I'd rework all of it somehow. As for the rest, I like the effects and subtleness of the colors and whatnot so good job.


And FYI, that's a pic of Hong Kong, not Japan

 

This I know.

But I'm calling it Tokyo. Tokyo has intense buildings too... Just not a good enough picture of a skyline that I was looking for.

 

Added a v2.

I like it better.

 

I hate bumping... but here goes.

 

The text on v2 is much more subtle and fits better. It's less detracting from the whole scene.

As for the focal, I feel like it is very flat, because everything is of the same sharpness and brightness. Nothing varies in contrast or quality.

 

nice the changed text is way better then the 1st one gj

 

Thanks m8

 

i think v2 is best . nice work