Reincarnating Phoenix

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  1. yaiQuem

    yaiQuem Well-Known Member

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    hey guys, please lemmi know what you think about it:


    v1[​IMG] v2[​IMG] v3[​IMG]



    all C&C welcome, i'm trying to get better at it :)
     
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    Nice colors, effects, and flow. I think the depth is little bad; maybe have the phoenix stick out just a little bit.
     
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    yaiQuem Well-Known Member

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    thanks i'll try to fix it, best way to do that is with a layer with blur filter and erasing the phoenix and a layer with sharpen filter and erase the background?
     
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    Don't forget to burn, dodge, level and exposure! Kiu- ;)
     
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    updated first post with a v2 of the sig, any further comments or critics?
     
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    V2 looks alot better but it isn't finished. You still need the phoenix to pop out alot little more.
     
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    updated again real quick, i did some b/w gradiantmapping n it makes the phoenix pop out more but lose some color :X dunno if i like it but its just a real quick try out as my dinner is getting cold atm :P
     
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    I like v2...focal isn't that bad considering it's a phoenix in a fire..anyways, effects, flow, and color scheme all are nicely done.
     
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    Yes! V3 is way better!
     

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