Reflections Of A Madman

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  1. Mortified Penguin

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    Its aight, good focus.

    But i would like to see more effects and blending mostly...

    Text is also a bit over powering.

    Try and bring some of that nice smudge forward i nthe piece.
     
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    Did you get the sumbliminal message though? That's the most important part.
     
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    Yea if by which you were aiming to make the "reflection" the focus, using the title and the symbolisim?
     
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    Do you see the reflection though?
     
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    No sorry dude... Then again im not well know with the image unedited either so... hard for me to tell.
     
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    Good grief. Are you sure you can't?
     
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    Can you give us the stock or render? I don't know if its Halo or a Motorbike Driver.
    Is the reflection the image on the far right side of the helmet? Or, he is the madman and his looking at his own reflection and the smudges on the far left and far right look like peoples legs.
     
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    That subliminal message is cool
    Nice focus, and depth,
    Great job.
     
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    I am not going to tell you what the message means, you will have to figure that out on your own. The render is Master Chief, the same render Propel used in our "Into the Maw" collab.

    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    Hmm...looks like it has potential to be a whole lot better.

    I'd like to see more FX to make it look a bit less dull though.
     
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    My main purpose was to do the whole subliminal message thing but didn't know what to do about the background so I did that. If I can think of any other effects, I'll add the,.
     
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    the reflection? you mean the gun pointed at him in his vizor?
    idk its kinda lacking man,i wouldn't of seen
    that reflection of what looks like gungrave guy,
    if i hadn't been looking for it due to the title
    :P
     
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    Thank the lord someone got it.

    Yes it is the Gungrave guy, lol.

    It wasn't meant to be all effects, I actually only added them because Master Chief's head with a reflection is kind of boring.
     
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    BUMP.
     

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