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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by [.BC.] David, Jan 29, 2011.

  1. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Alright I made two new versions:

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    hmm?
     
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    Hmm.... Don't like the text placement and I barely can't see the text... And maybe it could need a light source, otherwise it's pretty dope. ;)
     
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    ah ok! Where do you think the light source should come from? Do you think the text would be better top right?
     
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    Hmm... I gotta think about that.. But for the text, yes you should... Or at the bottom right, either way is fine. I usually don't like text placement that are in the corners, but in terms like this, it's good.

    Edit: Try dodging the C4d a bit.
     
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    Thanks :D
     
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    Yeah place the text on the bottom right...it will create a better contrast. Other than that..its hot dude
     
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    Cool thanks :D
     
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    I would reverse the blur, the face in mirror sharp and her back of head blurred, that will make effect believable
     
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    Dang, the reflection came kinda blurred originally! but thanks for the suggestion!
     
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    nice concept. just my opinion id recommend you not have your gradients so close to 100% opacity, it makes it sorta monotone looking.
     
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    Monotone isn't always bad.
     
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    Well very nice effects and blending,gj with the C4D's also.I agree about the text placement and the LS,and i would reduce the opacity just a tad on the white kinda square shape you used for the text compo...other than that solid piece,KIU

    Regards,H3ll™​
     
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    Alright I made two new versions:

    V2
    [​IMG]

    V3
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