if you want your focal point to stand out even more in this one, give it a mad sharpen and it'll stand out from the blurry background also, lose the text or blend it in more, it looks to plain and stands out to much
Took your advice to mind, and had afew complaints about the text, so I just removed it altogether. also sharpened the focal.
hmmm, i noticed that you also sharpened the blue bg to the right (dont know if the whole background got sharpened), just realised as i was thinking now you need to blur the background for better depth. do you know how to do something (like an effect of blur/sharpen) to just one part of the background? because if you dont ill tell you, if you do, id suggest blurring the background more, idk, feels more flat. id just say, increase the blur gradually moving away from your focal point. thats all i can really tell you to do with the current background you have, id suggest when making your bg's, have depth in mind, so when adding parts to the background, even before blurring, think that things really far away are smaller, so create smaller things where you intend to blur. it'll look better and more realistic, if you apply blur that gradually gets stronger as it gets to the smaller parts on the bg.
