The abstract one's pretty darn good. I don't like the first one very much though. Way too bright imo. And oversharp on the right. Good beans on that abstract bro. Lovin' it. ^_^ Maybe a tad oversharp in the center, but just blur a tiny bit. ^_^ Good work
Love the second piece. Abstractness is sweet. Not entirely sure about the colors though. Not as fond of the first one. The left side is waay too plain and the right side is oversharpened. I don't like the text either. Work on the compo.
