Rate These Please

here is one of the first ones i made using photoshop:



these next 2 and my current one are my newest ones:



here is one my daughter had me make for her and i'm gonna end up using similar text to design her birthday party banner:

 

come on people , tell me what you think please. what do i need to improve on. here's another one i just made:

 

try some advanced tutorials to get a feel of using filters for effects...

 

make ur focal stand out more, dont put it so far off to the sides and the transition effects are kinda detracting away from what ur trying to do,, nice try though, leep it up

 

they look alright 4 ur first but u should keep lookin up tuts dude

 

here's my latest what you guys think of this one.

 

alot better, just work on typo, try not to use the outer glow from the layer options make your own glow and drop shadows , but try not to use em at all and do different things to dress the typo, and dont corner it...

 

ok, i'll play around with stuff some more and try to work on text some. thanks for the comments. where do you think the text would be better placed?