5/10 - A bit blurry, and monotonus. Try adding some more effects, fixing the lighting, adapting the colouring, and sharpening it up a bit. 4/10 - Pretty good flow, but realism rarely works with sprites...The splatter seems out of place, as does the large red/yellow C4D, and also the blue/green bottom left corner. Again, work on colouring and effects.