C4D makes it look like crap, to be honest. Try for milder colours, and don't include C4D for that kind of sig/tag. Work on lighting(soft brush, lens flare, lighting effects) and colour(Gradient maps, photo filters, hue and saturation). 6/10 EDIT- Lighten up on the border also
beuatiful work. gothic yet sensual. gotta say it looks like she has the worst armpit hair ever though cheers 8/10