They're all very similar.. the text needs work.. and your style needs a bit more variation. I'd say 4/10 overall.
the render doesn't really go with the background in the 1st one i like the second one but just work on the text
5/10 A little messy, dnd busy. Text needs work. 6.5/10 A bit better. Not really much going on which is not bad. Text needs fixing.