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I was just messing around again and came up with this, looks pretty crappy in my opinion, o well

 

edited it a bit, i think it looks a bit cooler



hope ya like, if not tell me what to improve

 

I do not really like the negative colors, got the original ones.
The left side is too empty, there could be some more flow and the text is distracting, I do not really like it, sorry.

Edit: Your current is way better.

 

ok thnx, i didnt really think it was very good but i was just tryin stuff, thnx for ur opinion, and do u know any simple tuts? oh and lol i made another one, well i just edited this one again but i think its a bit busy, but its got more stuff on the left xD

 

Kinda bright and things are out of place all over. Needs more organization and flow to it.

 

yea ino, i was just messing about and tryin to see if i could get anything, thnx