Hey Im back lol been awhile and im rusty and what do I do attempt a tag with one of hardest renders possible lol I reworked the render if you look and know the render you can see the changes, I know its not great but I need sum wd40 to get rid of the rust lol
kinda hard to distinguish the focal at first. theres no actual lighting in there and the colors are a bit mono. try to use some more colors and find a light source, might help with the lack of depth too. also its kinda iffy with the effects at the bottom, seems kinda ehhh.. like unfinished. gj for a comeback though, youll get it back soon.
I agree , the focal was hard to establish and i knew this by selecting this render, and when i reduced the size of render it left like a white glow on edges and made it hard to blend hence the color tone, i'll get it back lol