R.o.s.e Online Hawker

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I got the original image from inside the Fan Site Kit. Here is the original image from inside the kit. Original Image



I am brand new to this website, and to Rendering in general. I would really like to start submitting more renders, so I am looking for some criticism.

-I hope that my thread is in the correct format. If I did anything wrong, please tell me.
Thanks

 

Thread format is perfect. The render, it has a couple white lines (well.. purple and whatnot)

Good try tho. Welcome to GR

 

Thanks White Boi, I feel very welcomed

I'm going to try and fix those white lines.

 

yea not bad for your first render.....
the only things ive pointed out really is what white boi already has.
keep at it and maybe follow some tutorials on rendering.(they can be found on this site also)
keep up good work mate,more you do rendering the better you become.
lets see more from you

 

Much better than most first tries I've seen, good job. Tip: Put your render over a pure blue or green background at the end to see if there are any white lines. This makes it a lot easier to spot them before you go to upload the picture.

 

Thanks for the tip Darkmage. That will definently be something I do from now on. ^^Thanks Ice, your giving me confidence

 

Oh, and by the way, what tool do you happen to be using to cut?

 

Pretty good for a first render, keep it up and you'll get better

 

I used polygon selection tool for most of it. But also used magnetic for the hair and thinner parts.

 

Some white lines there Thanks for sharing

 

Try using the pen tool as well

 

not bad for a first but there are some spots around lol