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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Sh00tevery1, Mar 27, 2009.

  1. Sh00tevery1

    Sh00tevery1 Well-Known Member

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    Sorry to double post, but someone has to have something to say about this.
     
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    The work is average, not finished up according to me
     
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    Ok, well according to you what can I add to "finish" it up?
     
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    Decided to read the comments on the page.
    And yes, at the moment, you're not going to get a DD, not at the required level, however, keep on as you are and everyone's got a chance of getting one.

    It's not a bad attempt overall, the small left hand side planet has a glow on the shadow which is a little off-putting, and it's too obvious that you've used Apophysis. The bottom nebula bit (Below the big planet) sticks out too much, it's bright against an otherwise solid black section. Also got a glow all around your main planet which, contradicts your shadow placement a bit. Remove the fractaly stuff. Lighting's ok, probaly a bit harsh but nothing too major. Definetely a step in the right direction at least.
     
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    So many space pics atm..

    How do you get the effects around the planet?
    C4D's?
    Fractals?

    Either way, looks good wd.
     
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    Broken: Yes I know I am far from the level of getting a DD. I am not anywhere near the skill level required to get one. But I figure I am young and have loads of time to improve, so who knows manbye one day.

    Also I know it obvious I used Apopysis. In no way shape or form did I try to hide it, I just like fractals and the effect you get from them. But recently I have been trying to move away from Apopysis and just stick to brushing. Also I will see what I can do about the lighting.

    Thanks for all of the help. ^_^ The art world needs more people like you who are will to give some c&c instead of just say they like the piece or something. Also it is an honor to get come c&c from such a succesful space artist. Thanks

    Vir4l: Those are fractals around the planet. You can make them very easily with Apopysis. Thanks mate! :lol:
     

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