So, after what was about 18 months with very little access to computers, I threw this together tonight. Clearly, I'm rusty, cause even I can see this needs work. What I'd like is for a couple of people to dissect it and point out what i need to [re]work on, haha. For example, I know the text needs...something, to make it better, but what? It doesn't stand out, but should it? And the render, is it too washed out by the rest of the background? Thank you kindly.
