Prototype

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by aяez, Oct 19, 2008.

  1. Oct 19, 2008 at 7:18 PM #1
    aяez

    aяez Well-Known Member

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    First sig in a few months. Harsh criticism/feedback desired.

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  2. Oct 19, 2008 at 9:07 PM #2
    Jiin

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    looks good to me, cant wait to play this game
     
  3. Oct 20, 2008 at 2:55 AM #3
    GRAF1CS

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    Maybe the lighting would look better if it flowed up more, seems to cut off by his hood?
     
  4. Oct 20, 2008 at 4:48 AM #4
    chipmunk2k5

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    lighting and flow work for sure.. maybe some depth work too... good work for a while of not using tho
     
  5. Oct 20, 2008 at 4:52 AM #5
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    Lighting could use some work...

    I don't know if you added a C4D or if that's just the render but either way it's distracting and kills the flow.

    Other than that, well done.
     
  6. Oct 20, 2008 at 7:05 AM #6
    Nasuul

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    WRONG LIGHTING.

    I have said this many a time and its a good lesson. LOOK at ur render and picture where the lighting is coming from, if ur not gonna change the lighting structure on the render itself then ur lighting must fit in with the render...

    On this particular render (which i have used myself before) the lighting comes from above and slightly on the left. As u can see the shadow from the hood shows this...
     

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