Prince of Persia

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by nickbus7, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. nickbus7

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    Hey guys looking for some constructive criticism up in here! please give me the truth. thanks everyone!
     

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    Hi there.

    Interesting piece, great colours, well blended and good depth.

    The effects on the right are not following the flow of the tag. You could place a similar c4d which flows with the right side of the focal. and blur/sharpen it accordingly.

    The face and right arm of the focal could do with slight sharpening to make them pop a lil bit more.

    Can also do with slightly more contrast in the background.

    Otherwise nice looking piece and good work. Just needs some text to further personalise it.

    Keep it up :)
     
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    thanks

    Thanks for taking time out of your day to critique this for me. I really appreciate it man. i'll take what you said and try and use it in my next piece
     
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    I like it.
    I would just remove the c4d render on the right side so it really looks like a nice slicing effect where those fire pieces are just jumping out of the action behind it. Hope you get what I mean haha. They just dont seem very in the movement. Alternatively just take a motion blur effect over them so you can make them yours hrhr.
    Looks like an "eternal fight" picture, maybe thats the text you want to use. ;) Since the background is pretty abstract.
    I would darken the right side a little more bit and brighten up the left. That would look awesome.
    Rest is very nice!
     

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