Prince of Persia

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by hellbentnm, Mar 23, 2010.

  1. hellbentnm

    hellbentnm New Member

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    This is my first piece of work in over a year. I feel accomplished even though its not what i wanted/expected. Im just glad i actually finished something.
    I would appreciate it if you guys tore this apart, giving me explicit detail on how i could better my approach on the upcoming works I may do. (Meaning extreme C&C lol)
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    Kay87 Well-Known Member

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    well im not good at this stuff and no expert, but i find it a bit hard to read the writing and to me the colors look a bit bland and it look flat on the whole.

    but thats just me and im not sure what advise i can give, except probally a little bolder with colors and sharpen it abit.

    sorry im not much help
     
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    Well i didnt really spend much time on the text. Wasnt the main point. But thanks for the critique. as for the color. I see what you mean ill choose wisely on my next one. Any critique is helpful.
     
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    Psvertjuh NotYourMonkeyNotYourRobot

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    The thing that bugs me to most is that brown right side, it really doesn't fits with the left side of the sig .. And then I'm not only looking at color, it's way to empty aswell ..

    Gotta be honest, I'm not really liking it.. Try to follow some tut's, learn some technique's other people use .. After a while you will learn own way's of using those technique's + own tricks ...
     
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    I agree with this, and is that a c4d over your render ? it looks like you used a 300px soft brush and erased some of your render but that might just be an effect?
     
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    I smudged the render and used a few different c4d's that i found in a pack i downloaded. Im still getting back into it. So well see how it works. Thanks for the info.
     

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